Simpler Language and format fixes README.md#160
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Suggestion for more simpler language and few Fixes in format and grammer.
For clarity & conciseness
->Original: "CloudMonkey can be used both as an interactive shell and as a command line tool which simplifies Apache
CloudStack configuration and management."
->Corrected: "It can be used both as an interactive shell and as a command-line tool, simplifying Apache CloudStack
configuration and management."
Verb Agreement
->Original: "The modern cloudmonkey is a re-written and simplified port in Go and can be used with Apache CloudStack
4.9 and above."
->Corrected: "The modern CloudMonkey is a rewritten and simplified port in Go, compatible with Apache CloudStack 4.9
and above."
Punctuation Errors
Original: "For development the pre-requisites are Go 1.11 or latest and a unix-like environment."
Corrected: "To develop CloudMonkey, you need Go 1.11 or later and a Unix-like environment."
Incorrect Prepositions & Formatting
Original: "One would have to hence do an initial setup of basic configuration such apikey/secretkey/username/
password/url for the required profile(s) as required."
Corrected: "One must first set up basic configurations such as apikey, secretkey, username, password, and url for the
required profile(s)."