gemorris / Human Experience Edits (Envisioning/Discovery)#868
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@biancafbmd Here are the edits, please let me know if I need to adjust how this is submitted.
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Thank you! great contribution!
My main question is around the definition of discovery vs. envisioning. Previously, we looked at these as two different activities:
- Discovery is the process of identifying use-cases given a specific business setting (e.g., what kind of insights can we extract from this dataset)
- Envisioning is the process of detailing and framing a specific use case into a clear business and analytical question (e.g., can we identify patients who are likely to have complications).
This is just my own interpretation of the terms. I don't think this is the official definition.
If we do decide to rename envisioning to discovery, I would suggest updating the diagram and text on the top page for ML fundamentals, as it specifies this phase as "envisioning".
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| The main goals of the envisioning process are: | ||
| The main goals of the discovery process are: | ||
| * Establish existing understanding of the problem domain and the underlying business objectives |
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The information is great, so thank you for the contribution.
In general, however, this text is a bit heavy to read - can we rewrite this in a bit more "Plain English" (see http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/how-to-write-in-plain-english.html for tips) to make sure our intentions come across correctly?
Examples of a few potential rewordings
- Understand the problem domain, and business objectives
- (? Not completely sure what this sentence means, but perhaps) State the limits of the problem?
- Explain how potential solutions may be used, and how we can measure the performance of the suggested solutions.
- Determine what data is available, and the origin and quality of the data. Take special care to understand if the data may be biased.
- ...
Similar with the rest of the document.
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@TessFerrandez Noted, I will be able to get to this around the holidays
Co-authored-by: Omri Mendels <omri374@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Omri Mendels <omri374@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Omri Mendels <omri374@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Omri Mendels <omri374@users.noreply.github.com>
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@gemorris are you planning on working on this, or should we abandon the PR for now? |
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@gemorris--would be good to address the reviews and get this merged. |
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